Is this paragraph grammatically correct ?

Great Income Opportunity
Katie L asked:


Liberals believe that believe in having the government help those who are less fortunate with more force and more government involvement greater opportunity and equality will be fashioned. Liberals hold the belief that things should be fair such as higher taxes for higher income, the rich should help the poor. Liberals want the government to step in and help the people. They believe the vast majority on welfare really need the help and want to get off welfare as soon as possible.

If you can think of anything to add to this let me know. I’m having trouble getting all of my ideas together.

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2 Responses to “Is this paragraph grammatically correct ?”

  1. 1. Liberals believe that believe – get rid of believe the second time!
    2. … less fortunate by using more force and more government involvement.
    3. By doing this, greater oppurtunity…. fashioned.
    4. … the rich should help the poor, and the government should help the people and step in.

    bye

  2. no, it isn’t grammatically correct.

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